Here is the 5 card Flickr story: http://5card.cogdogblog.com//show.php?id=25821
I attempted to tell a story from the perspective of a person who found themselves bounced through time and space, with no control. The limited exposition in my mind, allows a reader to visualize most details using their own imagination. Hopefully the text follows the images in a coherent manner.
After having finished and published the story, there is a part of me who wishes I was somewhat more ambitious with the story, especially in terms of emotional content conveyed. But I think that it was a good first story attempt. In order that I don’t find myself desiring to tinker with it, I will return to take a look at it in a few days, to allow myself a fresh perspective.
Strangely enough, when I first published this post, it dated it at May 17th, very odd. I’m pretty sure it is because I had typed this in the quick post section, rather than the more sophisticated post creator.